Revision, Two Ways
I am happy, right now, to be in the touch-up phase of The Deep Downstairs, but as I revised the first few times, it felt more like this ...
Lady, there's a bathroom in your bedroom.
Goodbye, pink bathroom. Yellow bathroom, you're next.
And underneath all that rubble ... a subfloor. And underneath that subfloor ... look out below!
I have more (next installment ... looking up) ... but the writing calls.